Hi Joseph Lombardi,
Thank you for reaching out to us on Microsoft Q&A forum.
Unfortunately, Web Preview for Azure Cloud Shell seems to be broken. This is why step#10 is failing for you.
I'm working on typing up steps for workaround that uses ngrok instead. It is third party utility that does same thing as step #10. It is free, you just have to sign up using name and email in order to get key. If you would like to quickly sign up and get your auth key I can walk you through it right now before I have all the screenshots/steps ready.
If you don't want to use third party tool then I recommend reading over the exercise and making sure you understand what each step is supposed to do for learning purposes. If you have any questions in this regard add a comment below and I would be happy to explain what is going on in each step if it were actually working properly.
Mention it, but if you wanted to you could complete the exercise on your local PC, just need to install some tools first. On your local PC there is no need for the Web Preview tunneling capability since you can just open your browser to http://localhost:8000 and it will work.
In essence, when doing exercise on local machine you can skip step#10 and then for step#12 you browse to http://localhost:8000 instead.
If you have any specific error messages, please feel free to share them, and I can provide more detailed troubleshooting steps.
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